每年高考后,就英語單科成績而言,許多考生預估的分數和實際成績有很大的出入,有的估分過高,有的過低,其中一個主要的原因就是對作文的估分不準。主觀題作文之所以估分不準,一則是因為平時老師閱卷原則性不強,隨意給分,二則是因為學生平常訓練不到位,沒有注意如何才能提升自己的英語作文檔次。
根據近年來高考評分標準的五個檔次中第五檔(很好,21~25分)中的“應用了較多的語法結構”和“語法結構有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用復雜結構所致”,可見,在學生掌握了五種基本句式之后,鼓勵學生嘗試一些復雜的語法結構,巧用過渡性詞語是非常重要的,其中補述技巧就是高考寫作最重要的技巧之一。
補述分為并列補述和后位補述兩種。補述的特點是既可以使語言連貫,又可以收到簡練、生動的效果,有時又能適時地表現當事人內心的思想活動,好處多多,寫作必備。例如:
Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival problem yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.
It was quite an experience for us both, which I will never forget for the rest of my life.
補述常用于事實表述后的情感感受,引發感想或對事實、細節補充的場合。并列補述常用并列連詞and,后位補述常用分詞短語作狀語,which 引出非限定性定語從句,以及由with引導的復合結構等。
一、并列補述
1、要點:上午學?;顒?,下午游覽市區。
I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning but in the afternoon, I will show you around and take you to some places of interest.
2、要點:大約4點離開。
Around four o’clock, we said goodbye to one another, and felt very happy on the way home.
3、要點:昨天我和李華參加了野外生存訓練。
Li Hua and I took pant in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.
二、后位補述
1、分詞短語作狀語。用分詞短語作狀語,文字較為精練。如要點:晚上看電視、玩游戲、聊天。
We will mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.
再如:Uncle bathed and had dinner, giving everyone the impression that there was no danger at all.
2、非限定性定語從句
The flat is in a building on WanXi Street, which is not far from No.2 Middle School.
At 8 o’clock in the morning, we arrived at the 201 bus station, where we were warmly welcomed by the drivers and conductors.
I bought several apples, which were very cheap.
They gave up the plan, which (=though it ) was a very good one.
3、with引導的復合結構
My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind.(該結構的情景描述功能十分突出)
再如: Mr Li came in with a lot of books in his arms.
作文中補述的技巧不難掌握,主要在于平時閱讀時多留意以及作文時的適時應用,一篇習作里如果有幾處類似上述的高級語法結構,這勢必會讓閱讀老師心動,提高得分檔次。
安徽省六安市第一中學 李登忠